http://ruriktochkase.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] ruriktochkase.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] elenabyzova 2010-06-10 07:23 am (UTC)

первая и последняя строфа - ну просто СУПЕР!
и смысл и рифма и такт,
и выбор слов и ощущение.
браво!
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